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one mad lost hope

Contributed by lostrelic on Monday, 13th February 2006 @ 01:39:19 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

I seen death in your eyes with a little dispise

your cries can not cover your lies

i dream of you when there is no one else

trying to compete in your game of joust

yea you knocked me down this i cant deny

but each and every week you phone with some reply

this muse i must take where ever i go

even thou it destroyes most of my home

this distank flake in my most questions thought

with gifts of nothing thats all that i brought

feeling like slime infecting something clean

my voice is so quiet fallen in this dream

lost in my way i blame all the rest

this is my time no help on this test

quiet rhythm this silent display

hiding away from the new day

alone i must face no one else to fall

another brick in my encrypted wall

really im not sad i smile each day

this is the mask for you i display

understanding my mind is one mad lost hope

thats why i numbed it with so much dope

now its set free im not sorry for my word

but its easy to forget what you just heard

now im going to speak from way deep within

what should i say ok where should i begin

Copyright © lostrelic ... [ 2006-02-13 13:39:19]
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Re: one mad lost hope (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 13th February 2006 @ 04:58:13 PM AEST
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awsome write

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