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underthe sun
Contributed by
glassicallyunsuperficial
on
Monday, 13th February 2006 @ 09:28:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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settled down in the dust
under the sun there she bask
O'er the plains there she'd run
under the sun, under the sun
and it's sucking up what's inside of her
and it's hurting what she's left inside
she couldn't leave behind
she couldn't let go of her "mine"
under the sun, under the sun
where all things' bright, they shine
but hidden somewhere it's dark
but the corners somewhere don't turn 'round
she's stuck in a dead end
under the sun, under the sun
It doesn't mean she ain't in the dark
under the sun, under the sun
she runs...
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Re: underthe sun
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 10:42:25 AM AEST
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I loved this poem.. It was great. I liked how it was written and when i read it it flowed wonderfully..
take care
christina |
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Re: underthe sun
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by mysonnet on
Wednesday, 4th October 2006 @ 03:59:23 AM AEST
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i love the way u put ur words
man, u've gotta give me some advise in poetry... |
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