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You Complete Me
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
on
Monday, 13th February 2006 @ 07:50:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
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You Complete Me
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You complete me
In more ways then one
With you, at days' end
All battles have been won
You offer something
A uniqueness all your own
That’s far superior
To what other have ever shown
You understand me
Cause you listen to what I say
You rejuvenate me
At the end of a hard day
You reward me
With the kind things you do
I’ve became blessed
When I chose you
You complete me
Makes me better than I am
You’re more then just my lover
You’re my truest friend
Copyright ©
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
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2006-02-13 07:50:45]
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Re: You Complete Me
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th February 2006 @ 08:08:17 AM AEST
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very good poem. I enjoyed reading it. ...Mike
As a critique: The grammar could use some work |
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Re: You Complete Me
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 13th February 2006 @ 11:19:26 AM AEST
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| Well done a joy to read |
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Re: You Complete Me
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 13th February 2006 @ 03:32:37 PM AEST
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Lovely poem, Jeff..I'm sure she will love it..
Hugs
Jenni
Have a great Valentine's Day.... |
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Re: You Complete Me
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 14th February 2006 @ 02:28:37 AM AEST
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| very sweet |
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Re: You Complete Me
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 05:00:01 PM AEST
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| This is lovely.. a beautiful poem for man and God.. thank you.. hugs.. raquelLeah |
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