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Rush
Contributed by
Leslie
on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 08:33:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
PetPoems
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Rush, rush
Here and there
Never knowing
If I can be
Everywhere
It is the holidays, afterall
Hush, hush sweet girl
No time to play ball
Her eyes beckon me
But it is off to work, doctors and mall
Now
Rush, rush
To the vet
Hoping all is well
In my heart I know
What I cannot speak or tell
An operation may help
I leave her in their care
Rush home, hopefully confident
With not a moment to spare
10:45 PM
She dies
I am devastated
And cry, cry and cry
I want time back!
I want her back!
I want time back!
I want her back!
Copyright ©
Leslie
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2006-02-12 20:33:46]
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Re: Rush
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 12:42:11 AM AEST
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Oh my...
I am so sorry..
it's like losing one of the family..I know-
Perhaps a tribute to your loving pet.. for your next write..
(just a thought...)
Either way..peace to you my friend.. and your pet.
Truly..
Billy |
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Re: Rush
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 01:49:59 PM AEST
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Really touching..I am sorry for your loss..
Jenni |
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Re: Rush
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 06:46:05 PM AEST
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I am not sure Leslie, if you really lost a loved one, or only hinting at the "rush" rush" rush" and with so much rushing, perhaps miss the "Quinttessense" of life.
But it is a very lovely and charming poem.
Oh Leslie, you got grit, you straightened a Bush basher out. :-) :-):-)
Praise the Lord.!
Hugs
lizabeth
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