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Be Alone..
Contributed by
moses
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Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 07:22:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Sometimes I just want to be by myself.
To be alone-be on my own,
I just don't want to see anyone else.
To go in my room,
and turn it up to a roaring boom,
just lose it to the music.
I sit and watch the minutes pass.
I'm tryin' hard not to think of the past.
Cuz now is now and that was then,
But I still find myself sayin':
"Remember back when..?"
Sometimes I just want to be by myself.
To be alone-be on my own,
I just don't want to see anyone else.
I wish, you could feel the pain that I've felt.
Cuz Life's belt gave me more than a little welt.
I feel like my Heart's forever frozen-it could never melt.
Sometimes I just don't want to be bothered.
And it hurts cuz I'll never know my real father.
I've got a Birth Mother, and sisters and brothers,
I've never known,
Man sometimes I just want to be alone.
Maybe I lack self-pride,
right now I don't want anyone by my side.
Part of me has died,
and I've continually tried to capture what hides
Inside in every word.
Dont' we all wish we could fly high like a Bird?
To just get away,
I hope God is listening to all that I say,
I pray-I'm now knealt.
Sometimes I just want to be by myself.
To be alone-be on my own,
I just don't want to see anyone else.
Copyright ©
moses
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2006-02-12 19:22:37]
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Re: Be Alone..
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by jyssvw22 on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 07:25:09 PM AEST
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i really enjoyed this write
keep up the solid work |
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Re: Be Alone..
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by all_that_i_can_be on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 07:34:39 PM AEST
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i totally agree with you, this is definately something that a lot of people can relate to.
and the best poems are those that people can relate to.
amazing write, keep up the good work. |
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Re: Be Alone..
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by themonk on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 07:42:28 PM AEST
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this one is deep man, is it of your life? if it i'd like to hear more somtime if u dont mind. verty well placed and the feelling flowed nicley for me, i was kinda like...in the moment if you wil....good looks. oh and i aint doin nuttin for vaca, would be wreakin havoz wit dub-g, but you know how it is now.
"the Monk"
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Re: Be Alone..
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 10:07:24 PM AEST
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| Powerful write, Moses. Peace to you, Laura |
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Re: Be Alone..
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by emystar on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 10:19:21 PM AEST
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I am by myself most of the time other than my dog and cats.
for the most part I like it tho.
Good write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Be Alone..
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by frankcube on
Monday, 13th February 2006 @ 03:44:08 AM AEST
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I really liked how you used 'Sometimes I just want to be myself' it worked very nicely in repetition.
Please check out some of my poetry, if you have time. Thank you. |
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Re: Be Alone..
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 09:01:41 PM AEST
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Moses a powerful and well delivered write. So many out there can relate to what you have written. I am one of them. Great stuff Moses keep penning for u have the amazing ability to be able to express ur inner thoughts and feelings so well.
*love n hugs*
~sue~ |
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