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goodbye time
Contributed by
CaseyRedman
on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 05:22:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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When the sun goes down
and the world spins round
Sweet memories of us is
all that will be found
You'll frantically search
and try to find
Rhyme or reason and
a pice of mind
Today I become your
long gone daddy
For the angels have come
in their long black caddy
I'm leavin this time and
Im not commin back
So wave goodbye as the percession
is led away by that 'ol caddilac
Copyright ©
CaseyRedman
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2006-02-12 17:22:51]
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Re: goodbye time
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 05:39:55 PM AEST
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Sad but well written.
huggs,
emy
Hope things get better soon. |
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Re: goodbye time
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th February 2006 @ 01:13:59 PM AEST
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Beautifuly done casey a sad and yet tottaly splendid peice of dark poetry. Well done.
Ben |
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