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the flower
Contributed by
bird_nest_hair
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Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 04:08:59 PM in AEST
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in the garden indeed she does try,
to blossom and please the passer bys,
with no substance but pretty pettals,
her roots begin to twist and nettle.
she drinks the water that comes so naturally,
that soothes the burns and plumps the weeds,
at night she closes away and hugs her knees,
and wonders what became of this seed.
the sun the first kiss of the morning,
dances on her skin to hide her morning,
and in all her glory colours and perfection,
though cannot save herself from the soils rejection.
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2006-02-12 16:08:59]
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Re: the flower
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by kikidoll on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 04:37:47 PM AEST
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awsome really pretty.
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Re: the flower
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by ivoryA on
Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 08:38:03 AM AEST
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| wow i really liked that... i love the way your poem is one big metaphor...its cool cause it makes me think a lot after i read it..good job! |
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Re: the flower
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 02:56:10 PM AEST
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| Actually this is quite good. I liked the imagery in this write. Excellent write!! |
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