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One Last Day
Contributed by
Jaz
on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 07:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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Two years ago, you had to go.
You were just too good for this world.
You left me all alone here and I don't
know what to do.
I wish you were here to let me know how to
handle the hard times and the good times.
I wish I could still remember everything
we did together.
I wish that I had been able to say good bye,
and I wish that I could have gone with you.
If I could have one wish granted, it would be
to spend one last day with you.
Copyright ©
Jaz
... [
2003-01-28 07:20:00]
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Re: One Last Day
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 10:32:25 AM AEST
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| This brought tears to me made me think of my mother who passed away a year ago in Oct. I wish so many things I could have done too,we just never get the chance! Do today what you were going to do tomorrow tomorrow may not come for some! Great write! Christina |
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Re: One Last Day
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by Tiffyo4 on
Sunday, 26th March 2006 @ 04:48:35 PM AEST
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| wow nice peom i lost my brother and i felt how you did when you lost your mother |
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