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MOONLIGHT ON SNOW

Contributed by lovingcritters on Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 01:09:55 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief






MOONLIGHT ON SNOW

Peace personified on this moonlight night,
It's partner stillness, brightness unmoving light.
Alone, as I gaze at the moon on newly fallen snow.
My heart is not still, my soul full of woe............

Somewhere a child is hungry, another is ill.
One is enduring a fatal beating, like snow very still.
Death's sting pulls mercilessly--a bruised heart's chill.
Our Loving Creator is not at fault, 'tis against His will.

In quietude my thoughtlike feelings go astray
There is no comforter, unfeeling hearts block
warm love's way.
Oh Dear God in Heaven, how much longer
must we endure?
Intervene, Please......remove all outcry our
hearts secure!

Until that long awaited day appears....
I hope you will comfort others in their grief,
and wipe away their tears.

In Loving Memory of
Patrick M. Solon,
1984-2006

Created by
LovingCritters
February 5, 2006



Thanking my Loving friend Patti for my
lovely sig.
http://www.angelsdesign.net/

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

"I can see, and that is why I can be happy,
in what you call the dark, but which to me is golden.
I can see a God-made world, not a manmade world."
~Helen Keller~

*Consoling Hugs*











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Re: MOONLIGHT ON SNOW (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 02:43:07 PM AEST
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I feel your sadness Conni? Is there anything I can do for you? This is simply a moving poem. May you and Monte find comfort in the midst of your grief

Hugs
Michelle


Re: MOONLIGHT ON SNOW (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 05:05:59 PM AEST
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Oh mom a fine tribute.
My heart's with u, momtie and all his luved ones.
God luvs us all and there's no end to his un dying luv.
4 eva luvs toall,
emy (yobrat)
god will dry the tears, in Jesus name, Amen


Re: MOONLIGHT ON SNOW (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 11:05:31 PM AEST
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Beautiful picture, Hauntingly beautiful write. Peace to you, Laura


Re: MOONLIGHT ON SNOW (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Monday, 13th February 2006 @ 12:11:01 AM AEST
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Condolences on ur son's loss of a dear friend. A beautiful tribute so heartfelt. Patrick passed away so young. It goes to show that death has no age. My thoughts and prayers are with u all. May his memories live on inside ur hearts.
* much love and huge heartfelt hugs for u all*
~sue~


Re: MOONLIGHT ON SNOW (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 13th February 2006 @ 01:14:13 PM AEST
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We loose so many it doesnt get easier This was so warm & touching I hope you & Montie will find the strength ! Christina


Re: MOONLIGHT ON SNOW (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 09:24:47 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful tribute.

Take care.

Scott


Re: MOONLIGHT ON SNOW (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 04:47:28 PM AEST
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You are a beautiful and loving person and this poem proves it. May He always be with you and you with Him, He loves you so and will always be with you to comfort you. I love you, your sister in spirit, raquelLeah


Re: MOONLIGHT ON SNOW (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchHoward on Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 10:27:40 AM AEST
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A powerful and well written work -a figurative and literal reflection of beauty and sorrow. May God watch over all his children.
Butch


Re: MOONLIGHT ON SNOW (User Rating: 1 )
by zenith66 on Tuesday, 13th November 2007 @ 01:59:55 PM AEST
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ahh this is such an exquisite piece, so powerfull and sad and the same time,
hugs
im so sorry about your freind, this gives him/her a perfect send off!!

well done!!




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