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Contributed by crazy on Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 09:11:34 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

2/1/06
here again i am
saying what i want
what happen?how did i change?
not truly confident in what i do
just acting as if i am

flirting talking being me again
feels so good
the ***** in back
with more sass then ever
saying whta i think
at the right moment in time
making everything better or worse
caring yet truly not at all

looking at you once more
as i did before i ***** it up
wow! thats kool
how you can just take my breath away
you see me as i am NOW
did i change for the better or worse?
do you like me or the old one

i changed trying to make everyone else happy
in the process
im finding bits and pieces of the one
who i wish to be
letting all who dought me
see,what i can become

do you still like me
or are you acting to dissappoint me
well if you are its ok
because ive already been layed
but i trust you for some reason
you have not earned my trust
yet i give it to you freely
what about you mezmorizes me so dang much
what ever it is i like it alot
im just stuck(on you)

without you there for me was so hard
but igrew to become strong
with or without you i stand
with more confidence
wishinh we could once again be
ONE.

Copyright © crazy ... [ 2006-02-12 09:11:34]
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Re: One (User Rating: 1 )
by DarkFaerie on Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 02:10:24 PM AEST
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without you there for me was so hard
but i grew to become strong

good write. i love these lines. i know exactly how you feel.

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