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Adultry.
Contributed by
Candice
on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 09:02:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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You regect
and neglect
peirce my heart
with a dart
of your eyes
to that woman
your new wife to be
You hug
nearly kiss
your lips
barely miss
then you smile
all the while
knowing my pain
You call me hunny
like it's funny
bite your lip
as you quip
you know it's torture
that you auto
but you don't
you simply won't
So this is me
at your wedding
the victim
of your recent bedding
as you skip merrily up the isle
you wink at me
that's just your style
Was that a dare?
Do you even care?
Your wife,
My sister
she's over there!
I'll tell them all of our deceit
Champagne the hotel
I have the receipt.
About to scream it up the isle
I see my sister her glistning smile
Don't think I'll tell them
I sit back down
I'll hide our secret
My lips our bound.
Copyright ©
Candice
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2006-02-12 09:02:31]
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Re: Adultry.
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by Candice on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 10:34:11 AM AEST
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| Very well written poem Candice, I loved it! Just wring his neck when your sister's not about! (only joking!)Just glad you and your sister are closer than that really! xx |
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Re: Adultry.
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by Manda2 on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 10:37:45 AM AEST
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| Sorry Candice, the last comment was from me, not you! Sorry. A great write! |
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Re: Adultry.
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 03:41:36 PM AEST
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wow very powerful write and beautifully done so.. you can feel the regret in this.. great job
JENNI |
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Re: Adultry.
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by all_that_i_can_be on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 06:25:50 PM AEST
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| powerful write. i really enjoyed it. |
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Re: Adultry.
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by maestar on
Friday, 17th February 2006 @ 11:42:10 AM AEST
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love it candy its great. I'll kill you if you ever do that to me really though. lol
lovely.
mae
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Re: Adultry.
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by lillyjane on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 07:01:52 AM AEST
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| Brilliant Candy you are very talented, so good loved it... I would ring his neck. xxxxx |
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