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My Poetic Suicide Note
Contributed by
assassinatorgirl
on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 08:42:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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In a small room with red walls,
(blood is all you can see)
Locked in here to stare as the ceiling falls,
Plaster black as my threatening tears from thee,
which fall like razors and destroy my face,
though there was nothing good to ruin anyways.
A dreamlike thought that I cannot place,
I hid it all and you never knew (as always)
Your fingers crash into my skin,
Grab me where my heart is and squeeze,
Tear my heart I keep within,
Free of chains so I can breathe.
Watch as each cell screams in death,
A tingling feeling as I'm lain to rest,
Goodbye to humans' evil ways,
I was unable to keep with your pace.
Copyright ©
assassinatorgirl
... [
2006-02-12 08:42:23]
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Re: My Poetic Suicide Note
(User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowFox on
Wednesday, 22nd February 2006 @ 01:05:35 AM AEST
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| Sad, but well writen. |
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Re: My Poetic Suicide Note
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by crazy on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 07:42:55 PM AEST
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you seem like me in more the one ay .so much pain inside so much pain your heart harbors inside.its so hard to do that by your self. i understand how you feel trust me.!!!
this is your emotions going from your heart to your pencil to your paper to the computer keys to the screen .so much i can see your heart crying out for help.i wish i could help people like me .
if you neen some one im here
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