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Longing
Contributed by
the_writing_on_my_wall
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Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 08:23:31 PM in AEST
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Of you my mind will ever think,
For you my heart will long,
For you my soul will ever want,
For you can do no wrong.
For you my lips will never touch,
My arms will never hold,
And yet for you I have no fear,
And am forever bold.
For you my eyes will ever weep,
My heart not far behind,
For you, my love, shall always be
Forever on my mind.
the writing on my wall
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Re: Longing
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by Te on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 08:47:41 PM AEST
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| it was very cute |
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Re: Longing
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by the_writing_on_my_wall on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 08:54:50 PM AEST
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Thank you
It has a whole lot of meaning for me and I am glad to hear that others like it |
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Re: Longing
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by brittaney on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 09:07:43 PM AEST
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| I really like this poem... |
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Re: Longing
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 09:59:28 PM AEST
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This is beautiful, I long for someone also,
Tell them,
LG |
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Re: Longing
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 10:01:22 PM AEST
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I cringed a bit when I saw the other comment that called this "cute". By title alone... I don't think I could use that word to describe this.
It is... lovely... painfully so. It is somewhat brief - but in this particular piece, I find the brevity quite wonderful. The flow is perfect and the expression beautiful... but it is the simple, straightforward, undeniable longing embedded here that moves me the most.
Nicely done!
~Snemmy |
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Re: Longing
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by the_writing_on_my_wall on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 10:02:17 PM AEST
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| I have... |
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Re: Longing
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by the_writing_on_my_wall on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 10:15:00 PM AEST
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| yeah so I had written this for my first high school crush, even though im still in high school, but she never so much as gave me a second glace, it was in ninth grade |
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Re: Longing
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by the_writing_on_my_wall on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 11:46:39 AM AEST
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| well, it would seem i posted the wrong description, this poem was written two weeks ago about one of my friends whom does not know my true feelings, the poem i had described, i yet to have put it up, but i was typing it into an away message so i was thinking of that one when i wrote the description |
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Re: Longing
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by the_writing_on_my_wall on
Thursday, 9th November 2006 @ 10:48:49 PM AEST
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Okay I lied,
I was really for my high school crush, who i now happen to be dating, but i wanted this other girl to believe it was about her cause we were dating before... Make any Sense? |
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Re: Longing
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by SmartBlonde on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 07:10:22 PM AEST
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hahaha, oh, the complications of high school relationships...
but it all worked out in the end. : )
i really like this poem, too. |
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