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The Last Time
Contributed by
gabby521
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Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 05:53:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm standing here beside you
And you are mine to hold
I could wrap my arms around you
I need not twice be told
For this could be the last time
That we'll ever be this close
I think back to the first time
That's the one I'll miss the most
I'm kissing you goodbye again
Without telling you just why
I've yet to tell you how I feel
Feelings I should not deny
For this could be the last time
Still I bite my tongue in vain
Lasting longer than the last time
Saving both of us the pain
I'm letting go of you once more
Against my every wish
Ignoring what my heart implores
To leave with more than just a kiss
Yes, that may have been the last time
And gone forever it is now
I'm praying there's a next time
To say it then is my last vow
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2006-02-11 17:53:19]
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Re: The Last Time
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by DarkFaerie on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 06:31:52 PM AEST
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| Good write, I understand how you feel. Saying goodbye is never an easy task. |
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Re: The Last Time
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by OzChick on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 08:53:26 PM AEST
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Oh boy, I wish I didn't get this one but I do. Caring more than one can show, wanting to tell your feelings but afraid of the pain that might follow. So you stay silent and take what affection you can. The last 8 lines are the most soulful. Bittersweet.
~Jenny~ |
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Re: The Last Time
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 11:44:31 PM AEST
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| Loved the rhythm here. I agree with Jenny bittersweet write, man.....bittersweet. Thank you for sharing, Peace to you, Laura |
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