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You, Me and The World
Contributed by
MuCho_AmOr
on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 03:56:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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You question our friendship,
You question my values.
Why can't you just let it be,
What it is?
Because all I want is you and me.
The thoughts I have,
Of happiness and hope.
Are all that I have left,
In this world to cope.
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MuCho_AmOr
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2006-02-11 15:56:24] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: You, Me and The World
(User Rating: 1 ) by Supafreak575 on
Thursday, 16th February 2006 @ 03:58:25 PM AEST (User
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It is good but i feel is the fisrt 4 lines could rhyme better |
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