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lostrelic
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 02:11:40 PM in AEST
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here i sit alone in deep thought of cosmic dust and pedaled lust
wondering if this is right or did we take a wrong turn
people dont care or have as much trust
but a never ending ability to learn
they say we evolve everyday in what way does this display
i see science moving like a freight train from hell
but on its track i think it lost its way
since evelotion theory has slowly fell
man made desires and sex on the screen
sefl-satisfying society hands i wont shake
domanited love and pleasure fiend
a pleasure that just wont take
all this i wonder where do i fit
shadowed by anger blind but not lit
feel like a old soul a lost relic
trying to see where i fit
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Re: lostrelic
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by poetmarie on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 03:08:43 PM AEST
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| Ooooh, I like this one. Love the rhythm. What you're saying here is so true. Kind of makes me think of a rollercoaster and the curves life throws at you. Ooh, havve to go write a poem now. |
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Re: lostrelic
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 12:50:03 AM AEST
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| (((((lost relic)))))) great write man, quite enjoyed it. Peace, Laura |
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