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Woe is me
Contributed by
Whisper
on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 11:36:57 PM in AEST
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All by my self
tired of doubting
what I am too do
Is it me or Is it You
Why does the world take
on these strange looks
One day I seem to have it all together
The next day a empty space.
The same ole question over again
Why?
Remembering
when I was younger
Everything seemed to last forever
Taking the good with the bad
I never thought
I'd be alone.
But I am
And whats really eattin me
I wonder where are those folks that
took so much of my youth
and where are those acquintances
I Welcomed in my Home
Sometimes their friendships
left me spent and broken
at times
Was it all my imagnation
I was the Fool
all around
Just a jungle of thoughts ,
dreams and haunts
that wont leave me alone.
A tangled mess of dreams
and dreads
Such a mess
my life is.
Not true to myself
Nor
I am I true to anyone who sees.
Why can't they understand me
The smiles and the laughs are all just
pretend
A protrait
A mental picture
used to fool them all
To hide
deep and calmly and carry
my secert feelings within.
And As I stumble and I fall Up lifes stairway
I get Up
Dust off
And
Try again.
I am worried if I disappoint you
I am feling tired
I have lost much
of the Will
But if Could have that second chance
To do it over again
Why do I feel
It wood all be exactly the same
All Over again.
Whisper
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Whisper
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2006-02-10 23:36:57]
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Re: Woe is me
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 01:31:41 AM AEST
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You have written and expressed how I feel so often. A very well penned piece of poetry filled with ones struggle within oneself.
I'm a sufferer of depression and I can so much relate to all that u have written. Chin up my friend and may ur days ahead be much brighter.
*warm heartfelt hugs for u*
~sue~ |
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Re: Woe is me
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by emystar on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 01:48:53 AM AEST
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And As I stumble and I fall Up lifes stairway
I get Up
Dust off
And
Try again
Awesome writing and I hear ya loud-n-clear.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Woe is me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 06:20:54 PM AEST
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An immensely emotional write.
You reached deep within for this and it must feel
somewhat better to at least get the feelings out
onto paper. I like the style in which this was written.
Great post!
~Breezy |
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