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Let me be

Contributed by peaceinfear on Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 08:43:37 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished



It morbid messed up the way i feel
i feel as if i let go of the wheel
my world is done nothing left to lose
i feel this is the last thing i will ever choose

take it away
all the pain and the sorrow
no feelings of joy
no hope for tomorrow
if this is it then let it be
let this feeling take over me

make me feel right
make me feel whole
take me tonight
ive paid the toll

the pain and the anguish
is to much to bare
whats left for me here
nothings left for me there

id change if i could
im j the way i am
i wish i was different
im taking my final exam

im failing this test and the world around it
its time for me to quit
nothing left to take or give
im tired of trying so hard just to live

if i can i surely will
take too many of that pill
make my shake make me shutter
feeling like melted butter
killing every inch of me
god damn this world please let me be



Copyright © peaceinfear ... [ 2006-02-10 20:43:37]
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Re: Let me be (User Rating: 1 )
by crazy on Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 08:42:51 AM AEST
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ok so you are really angery.when you least expect something good to happen it does so dont give up just yet.i know i did it got me on meds and put in the nut house .so no matter how bad it may seem now it will and dose get better trust me




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