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GETTING AWAY FROM ME
Contributed by
Forgotten_soul
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Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 08:30:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Calling me week, making it true, the one that I hate, that person is you, I look in the mirror, as I wisper my hate,
you are my evil, you are my fate, but realy your nothing, you are what I am, and for what you do, I sure give a damn,
I know you are hatred, but what you may find, is your in my control, my subconcence mind, I am my anger, I am my pain,
I am my sorrow, and I am my shame, you dont control me, your not even real,you dont have emotions, you cant even feel.
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Re: GETTING AWAY FROM ME
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by peaceinfear on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 08:47:48 PM AEST
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| wow u no i love it-- it kinda sounds like a short echo of my poem - but when you realize your in control.... etc.. hehe i just got dejavu--sorry giving it a 5 Peace :) |
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Re: GETTING AWAY FROM ME
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by Strawberry on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 09:21:31 PM AEST
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| Awesome! That's all I can say is awesome. I wsh i could turn my anger into sumthin like that. Sammi Jo |
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Re: GETTING AWAY FROM ME
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 01:04:49 AM AEST
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I don't visit this end of the page often..
but man..
I ^%$#@ loved this-
It immediately took me back to when I heard
"OZZY" for the first time..and I disected his
lyrics... both solo and with Black Sabbath..
It reminds me ..."of me"
I love it..
ass kickin verse...and worthy of OZZY..no $#@!
...that's sayin' somethin'
and I don't say lightly..
write on..
Billy...aka...Man On High
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Re: GETTING AWAY FROM ME
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by crazy on
Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 08:39:30 AM AEST
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i loved it so much hate for your self.but if you have no emotions how can you hate your self?
wow i liked it alot |
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