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My Sweet
Contributed by
rockergirl94
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Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 06:02:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My sweet
every time I see my shadow
how I wish that it was yours
and when I see my breath
I feel yours running through me
bringing light into my eyes
this candle will burn for you forever
and these feelings are like glass
becoming deeper day by day
In that moment I tasted forever
wrote letters eternal to never be torn
rushing rivers everlasting to never run dry
and I’d smile like the songs of the morning
for you are mine, and I am yours
forever, my sweet
forever.
Copyright ©
rockergirl94
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2006-02-10 18:02:58]
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Re: My Sweet
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 09:12:14 AM AEST
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| Such deep love put to words so wonderfully....Mike |
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Re: My Sweet
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th March 2006 @ 10:51:02 PM AEST
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I really enjoied this poem
the way you conveyed your love so perfect through the phrases you've composed
i reall like the lines
every time i see my shadow
how i wish that it was yours
keep writing
keep smiling
sweetstranger |
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