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Just Enough
Contributed by
moses
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Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 05:11:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I don't want too much,
Just a little is sometimes enough.
It all moves swift, such a rush.
To feel just a touch.
Our shiny metals rust,
and we fight to regain our trust.
Motivated by lust,
Uneven, not everything is just.
Hush, Just you being by my side-
Is enough...
Copyright ©
moses
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2006-02-10 17:11:31]
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Re: Just Enough
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 06:02:38 PM AEST
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| a good write moses and you didnt need to put any more in this is just perfect |
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Re: Just Enough
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by themonk on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 12:10:07 AM AEST
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oh man1 using so littel owrds yet giving bitrht t o so much prized emotons, amazing, this is somthing i can never do, i tip my hat to ya brotha.
Our shiny metals rust
ahh, ....beatiful
'The Monk"
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Re: Just Enough
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 01:15:34 AM AEST
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Moses one can say so much in so little words. Short, but penned brilliantly. I have come to enjoy ur poetry alot. May ur pen always produce such poetic masterpieces Moses. Well done.
*love n hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Just Enough
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 09:13:44 AM AEST
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| So much said in so few words...Great write...Mike |
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Re: Just Enough
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 11:34:21 PM AEST
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Bridle up that desire, this is a very beautiful poem. no pun.. a desire to read..
raquelLeah |
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