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Slow Endless
Contributed by
MysticFireFairy
on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 01:20:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I watch her walk cautiously and slow
Making sure she doesn't know
I begin to follow walking fast
Should I just shoot her with just one blast?
Short and painless or slow and painful?
Her speed picks up do to fear
Coming closer im getting near
She ducks into an alley thinking she would hide
But im too quick with just one glide
Short and painless or slow and painful?
She ducks and covers screaming away
Knowing that she wont live another day
Pulling out that one knife
One quick stab would end her life
Short and painless or slow and painful?
No one around to hear her screams
Till she is dead ill haunt her dreams
She cries and asks " Why me?"
" Your just a person and that will always be"
Short and painless or slow and painful?
I looked up at the sky as it begins to rain
Thinking should I really cause this girl so much pain?
Killing the girl is my deadly need
Looking down wanting her to bleed
Short and painless or slow and painful?
She fills me with endless lies
Filling me with hatred and despise
I smile and laugh as she plead
Giving some thought to my insanely deed
Short and painless or slow and painful?
I look at the body as it lay
Taking it all in im starting to daze
I start to run taking the chance
I dont look back without a glance
Not short and painless but slow and painful.
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Re: Slow Endless
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 02:22:25 PM AEST
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| WOW ALOT OF ANGER HERE INTERESTING WRITE |
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Re: Slow Endless
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by Whisper on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 10:45:46 PM AEST
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AH YEAH..slow and painless.There is anger and much hate. Good description to shock the reader of the depths of these feelings.
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Re: Slow Endless
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by WordsOfTheHeart on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 03:21:34 PM AEST
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Wow... That's pretty intense and quite vivid. Oddly enough i liked it though. Very well written.
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