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Rainy Day
Contributed by
kailadragon
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Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 12:24:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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look out the window
rain falls down
its not gloomy at all
but rather a blessing
the beauty
the trance it creates
the steady drip of the water
lulls me to a peaceful sleep
where I finally meet Jesus
but not His face
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2006-02-10 12:24:44]
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Re: Rainy Day
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 03:35:31 PM AEST
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| a thought provoking write ty for the post |
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Re: Rainy Day
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th July 2006 @ 05:23:27 PM AEST
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I certainly hope you don't teach literature, at least, not to anyone above grade one primary level.
This isn't poetry. It's a journal entry.
Try to have your writing make sense. Try to have your writing make sense to someone other than yourself.
I take away nothing from this at all. Absolutely nothing, which is surprising, considering how telly it is.
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