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Why
Contributed by
flamingblade
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Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 12:17:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I close my eyes and envision your face
I can't find anything I've lost my place
Once, everything was white
Pure and wonderful
It all turned to gray
And for awhile stayed that way
But darkness has a way of creeping in
And everything soon faded to black.
So now I know what I lack
You can't just let me die
I don't understand why
We all must be so small-minded
When we could all just be free
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flamingblade
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2006-02-10 12:17:38]
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Re: Why
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 03:46:22 PM AEST
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a good write with a good message ty for the post
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Re: Why
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 03:49:15 PM AEST
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i like this poem its simple but its messege gets across well expressed great job
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