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Dragon Flies
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 07:17:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Dragon flies once more
Ravaging all in its path
Raking heart with doubt
Fires of misfortune
Spew from its mouth
Hope thing of past
Clawing ever deeper
Self worth prize it seeks
Will it devour soul?
Warrior from within
Strikes back
Truth her only sword
Spirit mighty
Wisdom ancient
Stands by her side
Tale older than time
Time only tale
Life to be continued
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NoSaint
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2006-02-10 07:17:53]
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Re: Dragon Flies
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 08:28:32 AM AEST
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| Keep your chin up Shari, there are always better days ahead....Wonderful write...Mike |
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Re: Dragon Flies
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by Spike on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 09:35:25 PM AEST
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Shari,
The inner struggles rage on, and I like your dragon/warrior imagery of the different elements of that internal conflict. A poem with meaning for all of us, at one time or another.
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Re: Dragon Flies
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 01:36:22 AM AEST
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Shari my dear friend your poem speaks of ones struggle within one's self. I can and I think alot of others can relate to what you've written too. Chin up sweet lady and may sadness never harbour in ur beautiful heart.
*warm heartfelt hugs for u*
~sue~ |
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Re: Dragon Flies
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 03:22:24 AM AEST
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What a very well described metaphor. Life is a struggle, but we live on. Life to be continued......a positive end to this very well done piece.
Great job!
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