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~*i THOUGHT we would last forever*~
Contributed by
paul_x_walker
on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 04:31:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Why?
why would you go?
why did you leave me here all alone?
why did you take away all my dreams and hopes?
why are things different
why do things change
why can't it stay the same
but i still remember that june day
when you said you wanted to be more
more than just friends
i didn't think you would end this
not now
not ever
i thought "we" would last forever
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2006-02-10 04:31:44]
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Re: ~*i THOUGHT we would last forever*~
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 03:51:42 PM AEST
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this is a very emotion felt write.. its sad but i like the way it flows its expressed very well. you can feel the hurt in this writing. and i know this feeling.. great job though
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Re: ~*i THOUGHT we would last forever*~
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 05:17:34 PM AEST
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awww poor baby .
good write Jennifer.
love and hugs mom
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Re: ~*i THOUGHT we would last forever*~
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 06:09:07 PM AEST
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if everything lasted forever there would be no sadness i guess that would be a good thing for some great write got me thinking
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