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And so I say Goodbye
Contributed by
moses
on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 08:56:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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And so I say Goodbye.
A drop, rolling down your cheek.
Choked up, you can't speak.
A wave, as the wheels turn.
It rips and hits as a burn.
Seems like I can never learn.
And so I say Goodbye.
I cry, my body swells.
and we say our final farwells.
You dissapear into the distance.
I feard this, a tear is all I have at this instant.
And so I say Goodbye.
We had a story-worthy bond.
Can it be? Now you're gone.
A final farwell, well all I can say is Goodbye.
When we first embraced, angels flew.
I don't think you'll ever know what you put me thru.
What can I do but Cry?
And so I say Goodbye.
My tears here form a puddle.
We were peices to a picturesque puzzle.
Now getting thru every second is a struggle.
Maybe God has saved,
another time that we'll meet before we die,
and lie in our graves.
Now we pull apart with only a wave
and I cry.
And so I say Goodbye
Copyright ©
moses
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2006-02-09 20:56:24]
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Re: And so I say Goodbye
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by themonk on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 09:49:41 PM AEST
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man call the police! theres a murder. you were uinbelievable, u killed that poem to the face man, Moses, i dunno wat u talkin bout, but u can def put me to retirment any day, keep ur head up and keep that pen downnuckka.
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Re: And so I say Goodbye
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by craigcully on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 10:57:32 PM AEST
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| Though it's been a long while since I've been in that situation, this is a good refresher of what it's like. Goodbye can be a powerful word, and you did it justice. Good job. |
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Re: And so I say Goodbye
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 09:34:45 AM AEST
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I have felt the feeling , when you have a lump in your throat you just can swallow, and it feel like you chest is going to cave in, Very well expressed, and very sad
LG |
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