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Soaring High
Contributed by
Leslie
on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 06:47:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I am not afraid
Everyone will see
This consuming fear
Will not conquer me
I stare straight ahead
Not daring to make a move
Wondering if at this moment
My flight will be smooth
Suddenly I am soaring high
Looking all around
Above me the sky
Below me the ground
The bay is straight ahead
Clouds billow past
I know I am in control
And given the wheel at last
To fly this plane myself
From here to there
Is a feeling of wonder
No one can compare
I am not afraid
Everyone will see
For I am soraing high
High as high can be
Copyright ©
Leslie
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2006-02-09 18:47:08]
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Re: Soaring High
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by outlaw_mutiny on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 06:58:03 PM AEST
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| nice write. you know i read a lot of poems that sound good but i have no idea what they are about. not this one it sounds good and i know what your saying. nice write |
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Re: Soaring High
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by Opinionator on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 07:34:52 PM AEST
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| Fair expression of emotion but not very original, actually quite conventional. |
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Re: Soaring High
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by Leslie on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 08:34:18 PM AEST
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| Although my poem is somewhat ambiguous I actually wrote about conquering my fear of flying by learning to fly airplanes. |
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Re: Soaring High
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 04:05:24 PM AEST
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I thought this poem was extremely well done.... and I thought it could have referred to overcoming any fear, not just a fear of flying.
Well done..
Jenni |
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