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My poem house.
Contributed by
butterflygirl40
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Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 04:08:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Always wanted a house not a clubhouse and so i had to go to the courthouse.
I thought i was having delouses when I seen a ghost.
I had to go and buy a doghouse and I always wanted a dollhouse,but instead I lived on a farmhouse.
I didnt want to live in no flophouse and no glasshouse and surely no guardhouse.
My house look's like a henhouse.
I wanted to get away from this madhouse so i went and broke the mouse.
All I live in is a nuthouse and I had to go use the outhouse.
I wanted a playhouse when I was little but never got one.
I call where I live a poorhouse.
I had to go to the schoolhouse to get my daugter.
All I ever do is live the life of a poorhouse.
I had to use the outhouse cause we live in a poorhouse.
Nomore for me I am going to go and buy me a Glasshouse so I wont have to use the outhouse nomore.
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Re: My poem house.
(User Rating: 1 ) by outlaw_mutiny on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 07:02:50 PM AEST (User
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this does make sence. it is creative and everyone can relate with what ur saying. well atleast i can. nice write |
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Re: My poem house.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spazzo on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 09:17:54 PM AEST (User
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This is a cool poem.
Take care.
Scott |
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Re: My poem house.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 10:09:23 AM AEST (User
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Heeheehee...cute :-) |
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Re: My poem house.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 05:18:50 PM AEST (User
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lol i agree with Timmy there cute/. |
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Re: My poem house.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 05:15:01 PM AEST (User
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Hello Butterflygirl40.. this is another one of your deep meaningful, and educative write...
Yes, we all know what we've got, but we don't always know what we are getting, so we listen to our dreams of the heart.. Keep posting. I know you will do just fine. All my prayers are with you .... living in a glass house focuses on truth, we can see our special needs and encourages us to see a better view from a one room home where we are not shut out and are welcomed by smiles who see clearly through. The poor house yes, get out, you do not need to suffer or starve from what God can give to you. The outhouse is the old homestead, you know longer need to use. Very deep poem, love it so much.. so much wisdom in your poetry. hugs from me, raquelLeah |
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Re: My poem house.
(User Rating: 1 ) by poisonpen00ad on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 10:00:57 PM AEST (User
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Wow, I love this one.
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