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''I will not let him have her if I can't''
Contributed by
Sandra
on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 03:23:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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Your swear you love me, that I am your life.
You promised you would never hurt me, but that was a lie.
Now rage and jealousy over run your being, leaving only one thing on your mind.
"I will not let him have her if I can't"
Blade in hand you stand over me, the workds I love you creep from your pink lips.
You press the blade against my neck, and I begin to stir.
My eyes open, leaving your tear stained face to be me final sight.
Copyright ©
Sandra
... [
2006-02-09 15:23:00]
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Re: ''I will not let him have her if I can't''
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 04:15:20 PM AEST
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Short but sharp, probably like the knife itself
Well done
Steve |
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Re: ''I will not let him have her if I can't''
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by Kayden on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 04:40:43 PM AEST
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Wow! Intense! I love it... Everything was so descriptive... Kept my attention from start to Finish... Incredible Wright... Great Job!
-------Jimmy |
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