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Contributed by
nos_bunny
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Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 11:40:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Don't worry when you get older,
You can still cry on my shoulder,
You can worry about the past,
You can walk but not that fast,
When I die don't mourn my death,
Just remember my very last breath,
You may not know this but I get younger every day,
You may not think it but I remember every word you say,
It's strange because you're stuck inside,
It's funny because you like to hide,
Don't worry about your children, They will be perfect just like you,
Don't worry about being old, Because to me your good as new.
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nos_bunny
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2006-02-09 11:40:29]
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Re: Older
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by Nos_Bunny on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 12:01:13 PM AEST
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| I am just thinking my poetry is beginning to suck because nobody is reading it or commenting, this isn't an attention seeking thing, just the fact that I would like people to say it sucks rather than leave me thinking. Or at least read it..or is it the title of the poem? don't judge a book by it's cover... |
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Re: Older
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by themonk on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 03:36:16 PM AEST
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beautiful, veyr welled penned piece, i sensed a sarcastic tone, it made it much better, was this ur intemtion? anyways good work!
"The monk" |
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