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A day of hell
Contributed by
randyjohnson
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Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 09:20:49 AM in AEST
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My doctor told me today that I can't have any kids.
I had to wonder if it was because of something I did.
I learned that I've been sterile for at least a year.
When I got this news, it drove me to tears.
My wife and I had plans to start a family but now those plans had gone down the drain.
When a man learns that he can't have children, it causes a great deal of pain.
But that was nothing compared to the misery that came at the end of the day.
My wife told me something that drove me away.
It was something disgusting and vile.
She said she is carrying my child.
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2006-02-09 09:20:49]
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Re: A day of hell
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by NoSaint on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 09:24:43 AM AEST
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I am glad it is fictional...but a story played out in some peoples reality...good write
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Re: A day of hell
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by Kayden on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 05:11:15 PM AEST
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That twist at the end was unexpectid... Great job... Nice feeling... Everything flowed then at the end.. Just make you go wow... Great Job
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Re: A day of hell
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by moon_goddess on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 03:46:25 AM AEST
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| Pleased it's fictional! Wow that would be so awful. Made for a good poem though, well done |
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