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Better Days
Contributed by
curtisc
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Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 12:39:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The sun is gone and night has come,
as I walk along this lonely road.
The air is cold, my mind is numb,
just too many uncertainties to try and decode.
So many questions going 100 miles an hour,
and not a single answer in return.
When and why did things start to go sour,
did I somehow make a wrong turn?
Each day I live is the same as the last,
nothing ever changes at all.
Time seems to go by so fast,
and I just keep continuing to fall.
How long can the darkness consume me,
will I ever break free from this lingering haze?
I need to somehow stumble upon the key,
the one that unlocks the door to better days.
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Re: Better Days
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 12:59:25 AM AEST
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| Great write. Could relate to a lot here..."So many questions going 100 miles an hour and not a single answer in return." and the last line "I need to somehow stumble upon the key, the one that unlocks the door to better days." Thank you for sharing, Peace, Laura |
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Re: Better Days
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 01:00:19 AM AEST
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| Great write. Could relate to a lot here..."So many questions going 100 miles an hour and not a single answer in return." and the last line "I need to somehow stumble upon the key, the one that unlocks the door to better days." Thank you for sharing, Peace, Laura |
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Re: Better Days
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by Rumplestilskin on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 01:26:12 AM AEST
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| Give of yourself to receive for your own. The greatest investment with the greatest return, is to share with another what is your own. Sorry if this is cliche, but it is true, if you are honest in your approach. But who am I to give advice? |
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Re: Better Days
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by O7NeVeS on
Thursday, 2nd March 2006 @ 01:44:06 AM AEST
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| Definitely liked this poem better. This flow sounds more like your style...I enjoyed it...TD |
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