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Crimson Tears
Contributed by
britanna_rose
on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 11:09:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Her crimson tears are falling down
but no one can hear the sound
of her weeping--heavy sobs
everyone's gone, away at their jobs
No one cares about her screaming,
pain, and tears, and all the bleeding.
She's gone through so much in her life,
and that is why she needs the knife.
See, it's not just her blood that drains away.
It's the pain and torment of another empty day.
Her crimson tears fall to the ground.
She lifts the blade, as her heart begins to pound.
She drives the blade into her wrist.
She knows that she will not be missed.
Her blood pours out, onto the floor.
It drowns her pain, but she wants more.
No one ever gave a damn about her,
and now she's alone, just how things always were.
She cries alone, she screams alone,
and this time, she will die alone.
She lays there bleeding on the floor.
She slips away, as her dad walks through the door.
His baby's dead--he screams in horror--
if only he had not ignored her.
Her life was empty, full of pain.
She killed herself, but what did she gain?
Now in the pits of Hell, she sits.
With nothing to do, but reminisce.
Oh, what a horrible mistake she made.
And this is the ultimate price to be paid.
If only she'd lived, she could have made things right.
But now--eternal pain--she cannot fight.
Crimson tears fall from her eyes.
She lifts her head, and then she cries
to the Lord, up above
but it's too late, to accept His love.
So, her crimson tears will forever fall.
She can't believe she never saw
how much her family & friends really cared.
They just didn't know the pain she beared.
But it's too late to fix it now.
Now to Satan, she must bow.
She wonders why she was so weak
as a crimson tear rolls down her cheek
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Re: Crimson Tears
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by Lady_Daisy on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 12:02:10 AM AEST
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| You have a gift. But don't waste it one suicide poems. I must admit, that this is one of the better ones I have read. I know this poem means something special to you, so don't think I'm cold hearted. But cheers to you, as you can rhyme well! =) |
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Re: Crimson Tears
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 05:59:18 PM AEST
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| Very deep and sad. |
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Re: Crimson Tears
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by Forgotten_soul on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 06:15:41 PM AEST
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| so deep and scary, I love it. |
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Re: Crimson Tears
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by justinjohnoliver on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 07:26:25 PM AEST
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| Some of it was a little eerie for me since I'm not a fan of what I call the goth stuff but I admit you have been blessed with a wonderful skill it really is a beautiful piece of work. |
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Re: Crimson Tears
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by Drapes on
Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 02:58:29 PM AEST
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I really loved it. I've felt like this so many times before. I hope things get better for you.
Best wishes,
Drapes |
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