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war torn and weiry
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 08:44:22 PM in AEST
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AngryPoetry
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Flashes of sparkling destiny chaos driving the reigns
Visions of concrete barriers driving my quiet mind insaine
dogs of war growling firing shells at the moon
the end of this wealth will end and a war will be coming soon
radition sickness from a 60 inch screen
clouding our vision this demon is unseen
there killing for god and the progress of man
turning us all back into sand
fields of flowers and blank graves in a row
murdering there soliders someones death well never know
but war torn and weiry they raise there heads up high
as there cities lay wasted and the bombs light the sky
so wave to the man and thank him today
for killing this world and paving the way
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2006-02-08 20:44:22]
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Re: war torn and weiry
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by moses on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 08:47:41 PM AEST
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Amazing work here, I loved this poem...so true and I totally understand what you're saying here. Well done.
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Re: war torn and weiry
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by themonk on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 10:33:36 PM AEST
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this one is touching, it is so true in many ways, yet it is not do definite to pro[ose a concrete message, therefore it can touch many bases, wee done wiht the flexibility, i like it alot.
"The Monk" |
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Re: war torn and weiry
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 12:00:29 AM AEST
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| Good write, enjoyed it. Peace to you, Laura |
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