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Climax
Contributed by
LittleWillow
on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 07:16:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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a look
a stare
a wink
a gasp
a breath
a scent
a kiss
unclasp
a peek
a gulp
a sigh
a blow
a chill
a burn
a part
arose
a clutch
a rip
a throw
a while
a touch
a twitch
a clap
smile
a lift
a spin
a press
a seal
a run
a halt
a slam
zeal
a jump
a push
a crash
a grip
a whirl
a bump
a bounce
flip
a tug
a slide
a spread
a thrust
a moment
a climax
a love
lust
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LittleWillow
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2006-02-08 19:16:19]
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Re: Climax
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 04:56:53 AM AEST
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Very simple, and beautiful. I wouldn't call it naughty. You did not exactly cross a line here. This is actually a very skillful write to be so simple in form and subject. There are not any lines, not any real stanzas, but yet it is a gentle poetry.
Good Job!
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Re: Climax
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 01:50:58 PM AEST
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I think you got away with it lol.
a little subtlety
a lot of style
a write worth reading
Steve |
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Re: Climax
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by ButchHoward on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 02:03:12 PM AEST
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Excellent poem and unique in form. Erotic and arousing too! Nice job.
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