|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
my marvelous monkey
Contributed by
lostrelic
on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 01:40:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
|
my marvelous monkey makes magic moonshine
that tipsy tirent theologians tell tales threw
how happy he howls high hammered hopped hooch
little lush likes lime
spilt slow smothering sliky smooth
after another alcohol abused afternoon
realing reaking rum raveged ruffian reaching rehab
poor pityful primate probaly passively ***** permanently
the end
Copyright ©
lostrelic
... [
2006-02-08 13:40:59]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: my marvelous monkey
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kellros on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 03:04:40 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Found it amusing how you portrayed a monkey getting drunk :P have a good day, cheers |
|
|
Re: my marvelous monkey
(User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 03:12:39 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| lol i guess pis#ed is a bad word lol |
|
|
Re: my marvelous monkey
(User Rating: 1 )
by ButchHoward on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 03:39:09 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Outstanding alliteration! I have never tried this but you sure made it fun to read. This is probably the most difficult type of poetry to write. "*****" is not a bad word; it just means drunk in UK terminology! Very nice write!!!
BH |
|
|
Re: my marvelous monkey
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 05:23:38 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Enjoyed this..... and it reminded me of one I once did.. Maybe I will post it later..
Jenni |
|
|
Re: my marvelous monkey
(User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 05:37:43 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Enjoyed this..... and it reminded me of one I once did.. Maybe I will post it later..
Jenni |
|
|
Re: my marvelous monkey
(User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 06:02:07 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Hey Reagan I always like how u introduce different types of writes.You're not afraid to try something new which is really good in a poet. This is done very well. Well done.
*warm hugs*
~sue~ |
|
|
Re: my marvelous monkey
(User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 07:10:35 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I enjoyed this very much
NS
|
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
