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Destined Teardrop
Contributed by
Lia
on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 12:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I heard your teardrops falling
Into the chasm of my soul
It echoed through the valleys
And stomped through fields of lore
It knelt in ponds of worry
And leapt through skies of pain
It pushed the brink of no return
And pierced into my veins
It stumbled into fears unknown
And plummeted past torment
It scaled the walls of mountains
And punched through lakes of ice
It trotted through the glory
And festered with the good
And finally it found a place
For it to rest itself
Within a gorgeous ocean
Of emotions torn apart
To which it found it's solace
With the capture of my heart...
Copyright ©
Lia
... [
2003-01-28 00:45:00]
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Re: Destined Teardrop
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by fancyface4898 on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 03:15:19 AM AEST
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Very lovely write. You did such a good job
Thank you for sharing |
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Re: Destined Teardrop
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 03:21:53 AM AEST
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very beautiful!!!!!!!!
hugs nessa |
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Re: Destined Teardrop
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by WordPoet on
Wednesday, 29th January 2003 @ 02:42:23 PM AEST
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The journey of a teardrop... What a fascinating vision. I love the destinations and emotions involved. As usual Lia there is deep meaning to your work...
Doug |
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Re: Destined Teardrop
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by nebill on
Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 09:13:13 PM AEST
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| The luckiest tear in the world...to see into your soul and capture your heart! Very nice poem. |
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Re: Destined Teardrop
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by Dot on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 06:04:20 PM AEST
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| Hi Lia, this poem is beautiful. Write more. Dot |
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