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Fiery Eyes
Contributed by
felicitous
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Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 07:53:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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fiery eyes
keep your flame
close to your soul
or watch me burn
consumed by crimson heat
fiery eyes
ignite my doom
with volatile gaze
as torrid screams
fuel your scarlet devouring
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felicitous
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2006-02-08 07:53:29]
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Re: Fiery Eyes
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by themonk on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 08:38:33 AM AEST
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| great diction of fire and heat, ur message is senn clearly yet, hidden benif poetic mystery, great job indeed. |
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Re: Fiery Eyes
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 11:13:32 AM AEST
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| a nice poem but it seems its suppose to be more on the pic ty for the post |
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Re: Fiery Eyes
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by moses on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 03:47:01 PM AEST
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good job fire is such a powerful image/idea.
keep it up,
-m-o-s |
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