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Remember Me
Contributed by
twisted_metal
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Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 03:44:57 AM in AEST
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From this heart the tears pour out. In this mind the voices shout. On this skin without a doubt are scars I've left to live.
From this rope I set me free. In this world of monstrosity. On this chest I carve in thee the name I've left to live.
From this tree my body hangs. In this tree my soul remains. On this tree are bloody stains of words I've left to live...
..."remember me"
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2006-02-08 03:44:57]
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Re: Remember Me
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 06:01:29 AM AEST
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Very sad and heart wrenching.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Remember Me
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by themonk on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 08:46:40 AM AEST
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the emotions boomed perfectly in this piece, you style is cunning, hidden, yet revealing only what is neccasary, i love this line,
On this skin without a doubt are scars I've left to live.
Kudos to ya. |
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