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Purity is but the remainder of nothing
Contributed by
socialmisfit
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Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 12:44:51 AM in AEST
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There is nothing here for you
Your eyes have been led astray
There is no heart righteous upon yonder throne
My tower among the roses is gone
Here sits me, a lie
A broken husk
With a splintered heart
Just begging, wishing to die
Here is nothing
Chared remains with ashes
Where once there was a fire
But years have since extinguished
With no regard nor second glance
Leaving nothing left to desire
Dont waste your breath
Here there are only the blank pages
the lucky ones left pure and empty
The marred pages of my pain
Laced with regret
torn, and cast from my mind
to be joined with my tears to litter the floor
as i beg...
no more, no more...
With me the ending is only torment
There is only ever but more hate
A life of heracy
Laced in lies
Yes lies and more lies
But i will tell ya the truth
These pages are torn
Torn and splintered
Tossed to litter
I’m torn
I’m splintered
It's best to forget me
Leave me be
Just leave me be
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Re: Purity is but the remainder of nothing
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 02:06:47 AM AEST
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So sad but written really well.
huggs,
emy
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Re: Purity is but the remainder of nothing
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 04:29:40 AM AEST
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I certainly hope and pray you find another tower among the roses and brighter days ahead. Heart aching as this poem is, you display a genuine talent.
Good Job!
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Re: Purity is but the remainder of nothing
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by faith_my_eyes on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 01:12:39 PM AEST
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This is very beautiful and raw. That pain sort of sears, doesn't it? It certainly seared me. Nicely done.
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Re: Purity is but the remainder of nothing
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by MissMandy on
Sunday, 30th April 2006 @ 12:25:57 AM AEST
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| hate to be brusque but sometimes you sicken me |
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Re: Purity is but the remainder of nothing
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 06:20:16 PM AEST
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This is written very well, and I must say, I find your work to be even more impressive these days. The style you used here expresses your emotions rather well. Keep it up SM.
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