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Ice Queen
Contributed by
Lady_Daisy
on
Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 10:09:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Silence is eternal
Speak only to be silenced
Thoughts on paper
Only to be torn.
Gained the will to breathe
stopped in a heartbeat
breathing space was found
only to be blown down.
Temper raging hot
now I’m the ice queen
your touch can’t be felt
and never be felt.
Copyright ©
Lady_Daisy
... [
2006-02-07 22:09:31] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Ice Queen
(User Rating: 1 ) by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 12:47:33 AM AEST (User
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Short, but straight to the point. You go girl. I love the way you've written this. A very well expressed and penned write. Well done.
*warm hugs*
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Re: Ice Queen
(User Rating: 1 ) by Hatchetman on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 06:17:43 AM AEST (User
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Nice and simple, short and effective, Im a huge fan of anger poetry casue I believe it has a mission...This one shows true feeling...Very nicely written! |
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Re: Ice Queen
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kaori_Mizuki on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 03:38:26 PM AEST (User
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Its short but very effective. I like it. You will feel things again, you'll just have to give your self sone time.... |
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