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Trembling
Contributed by
TheKid
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Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 08:24:45 PM in AEST
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You told me that you loved me
But I needed to be sure
and now I'm here all alone
Heartbroken and insecure
I'm standing here alone in silence
A common dark place I know all too well
All I think about is the day I get a second chance
To cast a spell or bid my farewell
My mistakes hang around and haunt me
In the end to tap me on the shoulder
and I just smile and turn around
Only to discover my shadow heartbroken on its knees
So I keep on trying to find the perfect lines
But they all fall short of what I had in mind
To capture what I feel inside
So, I just just try but fail and try again
and one day, I promise I will get it
I try to learn from these mistakes
But the more I learn
The more I dont understnad
When will it ever be my turn?
For things to go my way
and not slip through the grasp of my fingers
To conquer the moment and not shy away
To be at the right place at the right time
To be able to say the perfect lines
To be a hero in a world of disarray
But life doesnt flow like a gentle tide
Always a sturggle of splashing waves
Full of ups and downs
So before you decide to give up inside, just relax, and enjoy the ride
Copyright ©
TheKid
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2006-02-07 20:24:45]
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Re: Trembling
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by moses on
Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 08:29:00 PM AEST
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nice nice nice....really good write. I can totally relate and have written many poems that are about the same thing.
keep it up,
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Re: Trembling
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 09:24:30 PM AEST
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So before you decide to give up inside, just relax, and enjoy the ride
good write. Something we all should take heed to.
huggs,
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Re: Trembling
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by OzChick on
Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 10:35:02 PM AEST
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I like this one, great write. Last line says it all.
~Jenny~ |
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Re: Trembling
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by ChildsFaith46 on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 10:37:57 PM AEST
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i love this poem......it has a great ending which pulls it all together...i can relate...
keep it up.....and thanks for the song i really like it alot (third eye blind- deep inside of you)
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