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Twilight
Contributed by
Leslie
on
Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 06:59:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Oh Papa, Papa
Twilight is here
When did the far
Become the near
I see the glaze in your eyes
I watch the pain-bent knees
I know you will say to me
Soon, soon my daughter
I must leave
You tell me
A good life you have lived
And I know how much
You had to give
Oh Papa, Papa
Twlilight is here
Please don't go!
Please don't go!
When did the far
Become the near
Copyright ©
Leslie
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2006-02-07 18:59:48]
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Re: Twilight
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 10:14:00 PM AEST
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this one leaves my heart weeping for u both as my father had to leave 10 years ago in Januaray. Just cherish each moment u have left.
luv, huggs, prayer, strength,
emy
A beautifull, touching write. |
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Re: Twilight
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 10:17:00 PM AEST
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What a touching write...
Excellent.
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Re: Twilight
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by Lady_Daisy on
Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 10:20:05 PM AEST
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| You have the talent. Though I feel as if though it could have elaborated more. |
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Re: Twilight
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 04:07:50 PM AEST
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Lovely and so touching....
Much peace to you...
Jenni |
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Re: Twilight
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 10:51:56 PM AEST
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A meaningful and touching snapshot piece that speaks volumes of your love for your "Papa". I'm sure, though far, he's near you.
wabl
KenMoore
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