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Let Me Be Your Walls
Contributed by
themonk
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Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 05:28:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Let Me Be Your Walls,
So I can shield you from the storm.
Incasing you in my concrete slabs.
Four sides, and maybe a bottom.
I'll cover your top with a ribbon,
Or even a bow.
And I'll give you as a gift,
For my birthday.
Let me be your walls
Or maybe just an object
In your room.
I can be your clock, sitting
On the wall.
And maybe then, you'll look at me
More often.
Or I'll be a book.
Wedged between your
Favorite stories
I'll steal the pages of fairytales,
And use then as my own.
I think I'll be a necklace,
Ao i'll be closer to your heart.
Where I can gaurd you
From those wicked dreams.
And you can take me off,
Whenever you want to.
Because where you place me,
Is where I'll stay.
I'll be extra quiet, I wont make a sound.
As long as I'm close,
I can make silent screams loud.
Guessing your dreams as
I watch you sleep.
And if i could cry,
I know i'd weep.
For of all the objects,
I can never be your heart.
So I'll just simply
wait.
Till you tear these
Walls apart.
(comments please)
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themonk
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Re: Let Me Be Your Walls
(User Rating: 1 )
by Lady_Daisy on
Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 10:30:10 PM AEST
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| You have talent, I enjoyed reading it. I must say this site does have some talented poets. |
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Re: Let Me Be Your Walls
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 12:44:03 AM AEST
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A captivating and very well penned piece of poetry. I like the way u brought this across to ur reader.
For of all the objects,
I can never be your heart.
So I'll just simply
wait.
Till you tear these
Walls apart.
Very well penned indeed. Keep up the fantastic work.
*warm hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Let Me Be Your Walls
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 8th February 2006 @ 09:47:18 AM AEST
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Moving, giving , and perfect, you are talented beyond belief, I look forward to reading more of your poems,
LG |
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Re: Let Me Be Your Walls
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by moses on
Thursday, 9th February 2006 @ 09:08:42 PM AEST
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vinnyV yes suh...You killed it nukkah. well done man i have to say this is one of my favorites by you. Really really well done.
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