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Pink Mist

Contributed by DesolantDreamer on Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 10:33:16 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Doomed am I to languish in agony till you return
I never said goodbye because of my darkened rage
Holding your bleeding body in my arms was the hardest
I didn't think I could go on without you here by me
You let go of life as I screamed in your face
You died the moment a tear slide down my face
I yelled at you, I screamed at you
I begged you not to go
I told you I hated you for leaving me here
All over a stupid fight
I cursed the driver, I cursed the truck
I cursed the heavens
I sat there, hugging your lifeless form
My face and clothes caked in your blood
I hated you for leaving
I loved you because you left
My souless eyes full of tears
And the hole in my heart gets wider
I lost you
You, who could pause the world
You left me forever
I, who lived only for you
I am the dark side of the yin-yang
And you are my light
Apart we are opposite
But together we are in perfect harmony
And when one is gone, the balance is shifting
Soon, I will die from the pressure
The pain, the longing
But fearing death has made me scared
So I shall wait out my time
And pray, just pray that this blood on my face and pavement
Soon turns to be my own all over the street

Copyright © DesolantDreamer ... [ 2006-02-07 10:33:16]
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Re: Pink Mist (User Rating: 1 )
by DesolantDreamer on Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 06:49:10 PM AEST
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I ment to change the name, but I clicked submit before I could...^^

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