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Within The Depths.
Contributed by
Baronhawk
on
Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 01:00:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Within the depths
singular lies
the things I kept
to sooth myself
a heavy heart
without love's care
a soul apart
that sighs despair
an empty hall
where echoes sing
tears don't fall
but sadness reigns
a wall of doubts
where hope is trapped
the field where dreams
I buried deep
a haunted well
silently shy
where forgotten ghosts
came down to die
this lonely place
where shadows dance
within the depths
of a lonely man.
Copyright ©
Baronhawk
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2006-02-07 01:00:19]
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Re: Within The Depths.
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by NoSaint on
Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 06:29:44 AM AEST
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I have been to this place...good flow...very good write
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Re: Within The Depths.
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 02:06:30 PM AEST
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a beautiful poem, though sad. I relate to this very well. This flowed perfectly and brought forth much emotion and thought. Nicely done.
Iv missed you!!
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Re: Within The Depths.
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 23rd March 2006 @ 04:37:03 PM AEST
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Dear BaronHawk...........I've really missed you and your smiling face and heart. Rise above the storm Baron Hawk............put it behind you....kites always fly better against the wind my friend. Come back and give us the wonderful privilege of reading your beautiful words.again!
Hugs and more hugs too
Warm love
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Re: Within The Depths.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 08:24:42 AM AEST
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| A heavy heart often hides behind a smile, yet I wonder.... cheer up my friend. |
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