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Regret
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 04:22:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Listen Hell....
I spoke to you of dreams
and all that's in a maze
We walked awhile in streams
and shared our bitter days
But....
I held on to a thread
of hope that we would find
a home to make a bed
and a past to put behind
and now?
You're close to me again
but time has brought me love
And not from you my dearest friend
she's an angel from above
I'm shedding several tears now..
I still love you deep inside
My breath is getting shallow
as my feelings cannot hide
I wish you got here quicker
so we could be the flame
that always wills to flicker
and never dims to shame
Damn this life of time
it's always on the run
I wish that you were mine
so we could be as one...
regret.
dw
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In_a_While
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Re: Regret
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 05:31:28 PM AEST
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| wow this was a very good poem ... |
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Re: Regret
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 10:13:15 PM AEST
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WoW with each write of urs Dwayne you leave the reader captivated and in awe. You are very talented and I can see u getting far with ur writing. A brilliantly penned write filled with alot of emotional turmoil. Keep up the awesome work my friend.
*warm hugs*
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Re: Regret
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 7th February 2006 @ 12:58:55 AM AEST
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The beauty of time is..it continues..always and never stops.
Perhaps in time you two will meet again.
Live in the moment...no regrets-
Beautiful lament dw..
Sincerely,
Billy |
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