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A Card Is Not Enough
Contributed by
Willofree
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Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 01:36:53 PM in AEST
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Although a Valentine card I bought
It doesn't address my numerous thoughts
To many things a card does not mention
Points that I want to bring to your attention
There is no description of your playful mischievous smile
Or the cute giggle that accompanies, once in awhile
The Valentine cannot express our pet names for each other
Ah, perhaps it's better we only reveal them to one another
The card cannot describe you pretty face
Or know, not with anyone would I change a place
A card cannot elaborate
On your desire for love and affection, to celebrate
Those softly whispered, I love you's
Perhaps a loving glance or spontaneous hug or two
The pert little bottom lip that quivers when you cry
Or pouts a little when we don't see eye to eye
A card can't relate why you don't remain upset
Why you forgive me, even with regrets
How about those times you smile
To cover feeling hurt for awhile
Or the little love notes you leave, to show
How much you love me, you know
Then there are the times when you ask the question
How much I love you today, did I mention
There's our playful competition about who loves the other more
And we go round and round, till we can't anymore
Then there are the loving omissions
Sometimes saying nothing is the most loving condition
So how do you discover a card to say all that, to present
Unless I place this poem in the Valentine card I sent
Yes you are my Valentine
But for a lot more reasons then any card I find
Copyright ©
Willofree
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Re: A Card Is Not Enough
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 01:43:38 PM AEST
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awww! so sweet! beautifully written:)
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: A Card Is Not Enough
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by emystar on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 01:43:46 PM AEST
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Beautifull.
I know u 2 know how fortunate ur to have eacg other.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: A Card Is Not Enough
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 01:53:13 PM AEST
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That's true, a card cannot say all those things.True love is deeper than a once a year token.A lesson for us all, tell the one you love that you do love them............more than once a year !!!
Steve |
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Re: A Card Is Not Enough
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 03:20:13 PM AEST
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| Aww! Beautiful write! |
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Re: A Card Is Not Enough
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by shortcut on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 08:13:49 PM AEST
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| How incredibly wonderful, she is so lucky to have an expressive man like you, very well written. RC |
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Re: A Card Is Not Enough
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 06:43:08 PM AEST
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Gosh, Will, this was just beautiful. A perfect Valentine's Day thought
and gift. And you are completely correct. I don't think there is a
woman alive, who wouldn't love a beautiful picece of poetry
like this to mark the day of lovers, in her card. Even in it's stead !!
Sounds like you two are very lucky ! : )
*sigh*
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Re: A Card Is Not Enough
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by Nazmythian on
Saturday, 25th March 2006 @ 04:52:07 PM AEST
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Ok ... well here is a good indication of how far behind I have fallen. March is nearly over and I am reading Valentine poems. I can't help but think Terry ... this would be better than any card you could ever hope to find.
Nazzy ~ |
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