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Ocean meditation
Contributed by
PatchAdams
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Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 09:30:00 PM in AEST
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Here I sit once more on the cliff`s edge,
Gazing out to the Vast Ocean below,
White thunderous waves crash against the
crags and crevices, filling the cool
salty air with Ozone and sparkling foam.
Concentrated light creating beautiful rainbows everywhere, enchantment surrounds me in this marine paradise, I sit alone and listen with eyes closed and heart open, feeling the natural meditation overwhelm my senses. My world begins to glow.
Seagulls soar towards the golden sun high above, catching warm currents and spiral in the vast blue heavens, then divebomb into the cool depths below to grasp unlucky fish, and the whole ocean sparkles like thousands of tiny crystals as their splashes reach towards the sky.
Something beautiful and ancient stirs within my soul, I feel that I have always belonged to this watery realm, and to it one day, I shall return..
A cool breeze blows across my face, and I rouse from my meditation. It is time to leave once more, but a welcome awaits me tomorrow, where once again I shall merge with the blue.....
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Re: Ocean meditation
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 10:58:19 PM AEST
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| Patch,this was so beautiful it really took me to that place! Lovely write! Welcome!Christina |
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Re: Ocean meditation
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 11:27:33 PM AEST
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| Alan this is lovely, I love sitting by ocean water too only haven't done so in years, so beautifully written and love the, "ancient stirs within my soul".. very sweet write and gives one a peaceful feeling:) hugs and beauty to you and yours, always Nessa |
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Re: Ocean meditation
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by Lia on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 11:35:32 PM AEST
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| this is so peaceful and serene.. |
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Re: Ocean meditation
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 03:23:20 AM AEST
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I find this hard to believe this was your first poem this was amazing. Really created great imagery in my head. Damn if only I could write like you.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Ocean meditation
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by Broken_Skin on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 05:58:58 AM AEST
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so relaxing, i can just imagin it so well....
xxx
broken skin |
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